First, revolution suggests a new idea like her speech. She changed the mind that adults are way more better than children on all aspects. Also, she suggested that children should sometimes teach adults too.
Second, her speech gives us shock like revolution. She showed what children can do for the world. Also, her original speech shocked me because a young child like her gave this kind of good speech. She gave good examples and many other evidences to show us that children are not worse than adults.
Third, she stands up against adults who say that she is childish.This is like a revolution too. She says that the word "childish" should be banned. She shows what children are better than adults.
As I agree, I hope everyone should stop using the word childish. Being a child is not a bad thing.
I have some disagreement with her speech. She criticizes about adults so much. Her speech was kind of depicting adults as ridiculous and funny poeple. She had some rude expressions too. However, I agree with her idea more than I disagree with her. Therefore, I liked the speech.
This is the video about her speech
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ReplyDeleteAt the end of your response, you write that you have some disagreement with parts of Miss Svitak's speech, but you don't explain what you disagree with. You should explain this more.